Purple-Slurpie's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Toccata Per Rollins]

Is this original?

If so, nice work, just try to make some sort of change in the middle, like it has a retardando and then builds back up... or possibly a huge Creshendo. I liked it, but it did tend to get a bit repetitive. The only thing that bothered me was the ending. It was so abrupt and I didn't like that chord that you used.

MJTTOMB responds:

Yeah, I ended it in a hurry. And yes, it's quite original. As for the chord, I was just trying to get back to the home key without having to think about it.

[Hallway Abyss *Fixed*]

Awesome

Just one thing.........
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.....OUTRO!! it has an excellent build up and a great climax, but no outro.

Tancrisism responds:

Thanks. Work in progress.

[While My Guitar Gently Weeps]

That is such a great song.

I love that song so much and it's sad that barely anyone has heard of it before. You should send in the solo to it or just the full song. The solo is increadable and would get excellent reviews.

Tancrisism responds:

Hmm, maybe I will. Thanks for the tip.

[My bands classic rock jam #2]

Pretty gewd, just a few comments.

First off- some of your solo riffs sounded like they didn't fit in a little bit.

2nd- it starts off great, but looses momentum at like 20 seconds in.

3rd- you can hardly hear the rythmic guitar try and turning it up- but don't make it overpower.

4th- I have a clue why this one isn't as good as your other song... NO COWBELL, lolz. Cowbell rulez

Mistasmijen responds:

first off- yeah i udnerstand that, sometimes i get a bit off beat and what not and i have a few dead frets that are hard to it.

2nd-the song is kidna boring, im trying to break from repitition

3rd. will do

4th- gotta have mor cowbell

thanks again!

[G7 Blues Shuffle]

Great, just one problem

You need to back off on the Rythmic guitar, the lead was good, just hard to hear. It's great to see someone else on NG with a taste for blues though.

I've noticed that you provide a lot of diversity in your music, like blues, classical, and classical rock, which is great. Just keep improving and it'll sound great. I'm looking forward to your new stuff!

Tancrisism responds:

Awesome, thanks man! It's always nice to see someone else with a taste for blues and such.

[Crossroads]

awesome!

I love Clapton, and you pulled this off, just try a little less distortion. I bet that if you posted Layla or one of his more famous songs, you'd get a lot of DLs, but my favorite stuff of his is when he plays with Cream or BB King. Keep up the good work!

Tancrisism responds:

My favorite thing he has done is definately Blind Faith. Thanks/

[Hey Joe cover]

This is great

That is a difficult song to pull off, but you did it. It took me like 3 months to get the verse fills right. Hendrix is a god.

Mistasmijen responds:

hendrix is the god